A Swim At The Beach
It was a hot afternoon when I was trying to find shade. My feet were burning from the hot gold sand. I could hear the wave smashing through each other. I couldn't wait to jump in the water.
Soon the sun was covered by clouds and the tide was out. I could go for a swim. I ran as fast as I could. When I got in the sea it felt very refreshing . I could feel the wind blowing through my hair . Me and my family went swimming.
We found three fishes. I accidently picked up a jellyfish thinking it was a piece of rubbish. It felt like jelly rubbing through my fingers.
It was getting late so we had to get change then we went home.
You are learning to do paragraphs. The first paragraph sets the scene really well. You have described your day really well. I like the description of you picking up the jellyfish.
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